Feelings Rise

Feelings rise
 No compromise
Waiting to surmise 
 The look in his eyes
Finally to realize
 The time has come
It has just begun
 To see what shall become
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 2, 2010 at 11:49 AM
I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Jodie. Love, Carol
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December 2, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Very flowing words with equally nice rhynming on feelings, Jodie
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