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feelings of a man

To be on a hill on a tall dark horse,
With the wind
In a slight breeze
To take away the sweat from your forehead
And your steed
As look down at where you will be, with ease

Shining all in your full battle gear, 
The sun reflects of all your medals of heroism
Pinned up on your chest
Shining out the thoughts of your loves, shining near
Your favorite surrounds your own heart, 
You’re at and with your best

As you ready to go into the rift of blood and chaos
It is the loved ones on your mind that you protect
With your own life, as your heart will reflect 
A time in your life you enjoy a tear
For yourself, as you ride out to a possible loss
To meet deaths own door without fear, 
And feel more alive now than ever before 
with the souls you protect  
With the feelings of a man	


written 062714		

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/2/2015 7:37:00 PM
Cynthia, Thank you once agian for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:30:00 AM
Cynthia, thank you for the wonderful reply...LINDA
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/25/2014 5:29:00 AM
you deserve all those replies you have been so instrumental here in keeping me feeling I am alive and should keep trying
Date: 7/29/2014 12:34:00 PM
Cynthia! A powerful thought and theme... Verlena, has the most outrageous contest on the soup so far. She is awesome. I enjoyed viewing all the winning poems on her list. Congratulations, on making her list... XOX :) LINDA
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 8/31/2014 4:35:00 AM
thank you linda, I just found your note, I was seeing if I need to tweak a line or a word or two, thank you, I will check verlena when she has another contest, I do check often, to see what contests are running, but I don't enter many, I do not think I have enough experience for them yet, but at least I am treated so much better here, and not so rudely insulted when I go over their heads, or miss a capital letter,
Date: 7/25/2014 11:26:00 AM
Wonderful write Cynthia! Congrats on big win!
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 7/26/2014 9:12:00 AM
thank you, it is a big win right into the hearts and minds of others, poets I have met to be of such gifted talent, I am surrounded in poet heaven here
Date: 7/25/2014 8:46:00 AM
A very fine write, courage and steadfastness are both to be honored. You did so well in that poem! Congrats!!!!
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 7/26/2014 9:15:00 AM
thank you I had to redraft it a little it was not born to long ago, and needed the correct name that I got from contest,:) but waited till it was over, and it did touch many in a good way, that feels good it is like getting the feeling you write back at you
Date: 7/24/2014 11:31:00 PM
Empowerment though a metaphoric essence. Congratulations Cynthia on your high placement in this contest... Verlena
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 7/26/2014 9:17:00 AM
oh thank you so much I am humbled from my winning, I had to retitle poem , contest gave me good ideas for it, but I saved till after, it was just born. and I need to see my babies are doing well and if they can grow
Date: 6/27/2014 4:01:00 AM
Its never been so easier to get the full picture of another man's imagination through a piece of writing.
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 7/26/2014 9:21:00 AM
oh it is funny I just thought of your thoughts I am not a man,:) never was, but I love westerns and documentaries on old battles, and I feel what they feel because as a mother I would get up on a horse myself to protect my loved ones, I may know a little of how joan of the arc felt,
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 6/27/2014 5:03:00 AM
I was actually afraid to post it, but another poet here inspired me too,