"feelings"

My words you say make you soft and warm..
My glances you say make you melt..
My desire you see is to climb into you heart 
and soul and sway around in all your love..
A look from you fills my heart with passion..
An honor it is to be in your arms of compassion..
A love like this I think we both fought..
But real love my sweet shall always be caught..
A journey you say with a story not complete..
With a lady like you, a love like this is hard to cheat..
So with your beauty and your class, I shall enjoy
this all and hope it last..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Sweet love..yes love can be so sour but other times so sweet..Charma
Witt-King Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 9:27 PM
Such a lovely tender poem of hopeful love, Michael. I saw your blog and came to visit. Really enjoyed finding this one.
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 12:00 PM
This is very charming. Happy for you both! Luv, andrea
A   Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 8:45 AM
Takes a man to admit his wife, or love . Is better than his temptation. Nice.
Devonshire Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 8:43 AM
I hope this love does last for you, Michael. It's a rare find! Show her this poem and she will continue to "melt." I know I did. Love, Carolyn
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