Feeling the Weather

like scattered atoms
                            the snow seems to fall
                              anywhere but down




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 11:51 PM
Ah, your ideas are so much fun, and so wise, my friend! This poem is the poem of a thinker, and an appreciator.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Thank you for your kind words Caren! Hugs :))) xomo
Vaso Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 2:35 AM
Sadly its only falling down here, more so on my driveway for some bizarre reason!!!! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Blame Murphy... ;)
Kiser Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:56 PM
Fabulous imagery in this one; yes it does.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Thank you M.L. ;) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 8:39 PM
WOW!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Thank you! :))) xomo!
Krampe Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Love this kind of snowfall - but it's enough already!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Today we had the prettiest snowfall, the kind that coats the trees like spray on snow ;) ...and the best is it's not going to stick around.
Bauer Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 4:46 PM
ha! yes, i'm familiar with those days! hope you can enjoy it in some way, maureen...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 9:51 PM
I have husky, makes it fun; that and every snowfall is a fabulous day I don't have to bike ;) xomo!
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 3:37 PM
so descriptive Mo, makes me glad we don't have the white stuff here at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Thank you Jan! I'm watching it snow right now, the flakes have their bearings today ;) xomo
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Must be gusty..I see it whirling..well painted scene.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 3:05 PM
It weirdly wasn't that windy, the flakes just looked confused ;) xomo!
Connelly Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Amazingly Canadian Maureen, or anywhere where the snow falls. Failing to see hope's inspired hands, I saw a position 69 vagina, but in this poem only snow. Lo siento Maureen, but mucho gracias for this.
Connelly Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 4:44 PM
Yes I was compelled to say IT. That's what I saw...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 3:01 PM
...oh, you went and said it ;p LOL!
Leffanta Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Another scurry flurry? Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Succinctly so! ;) xomo!
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