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Poem written inspired by my vicarious experience.

Feeling the Season

feeling  like dancing
on fluffy clouds of colorful petals
inhaling the  heaven scents
as I imagine an autumn
through my vicarious experience






Nov. 1,2012

This is gogyoka form of poem.


Second Place
Contest: Gogyoka
Contest Judged: 11/7/2012
Sponsor: Poet Joann Grisetti

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Poet Destroyer A

January 8, 2013 at 1:57 PM

Hi Leo... how are you stopping by to say and read a few of your poems again...LOL..thank you so much for making my morning seem better than it was... always~ you sis ...pd

Poet Destroyer A

December 3, 2012 at 9:02 AM

Feeling your hugs like the season.... I'm at work...looking in on my phone...hi...sisie.... how r u...pd

Harry Horsman

December 1, 2012 at 4:01 AM

love this, belated congrats, harry

Matthew Anish

November 21, 2012 at 9:22 AM

Congratulations on your finish in the contest. Sweet natural scenes here!Love & Peace Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

November 10, 2012 at 5:57 PM

Leo, my sisie-pooh, :-) how are you??CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 9, 2012 at 2:08 AM

Hi Leo, Congratulations on your well deserved win missed seeing you about . xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 8, 2012 at 11:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Leonora. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

November 8, 2012 at 9:49 AM

Why is it a "vicarious experience" Do you live in a very warm climate? Intresting work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Tahera Mannan

November 7, 2012 at 9:54 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Leonora.

Joann Grisetti

November 7, 2012 at 5:26 PM

congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2012 at 4:17 PM

Hi, sweet Leonora, good to see you today by going thru this winners list. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Poet Destroyer A

November 3, 2012 at 11:03 PM

Hi, Leonora.. are you here on the soup right now... :-) pd

Nette Onclaud

November 3, 2012 at 5:04 PM

Norie, dropping by to check if you have a new one.. spin away!...:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

November 3, 2012 at 2:04 PM

Hola, sisie-pooh... nice to see you here. and above all... I love this wonderful Tanka, i love all the images ...wow..can you imagine me inhaling this wonderful heaven scent image... love it...pd

Andrea Dietrich

November 3, 2012 at 2:06 AM

So glad to see this gem before I go offline Its after 2 a.m now here. STayed up late. It was a bad day. And didn't have time to do anything with Soup until now. Well, I did a blog for Susan if you want to go see it, earlier this day. Have a lovely weekend, Leonora. Luv, Andrea

David Nickle Read

November 2, 2012 at 10:28 PM

Feeling the beauty of your words, inspiring....... Read ;{>

Tanya Harrington

November 2, 2012 at 2:53 PM

Ahhh, you had me at dancing. :) Love this gogyoka! Tanya

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2012 at 12:45 PM

a stunning depiction of a season graceful as your lines floating on this page, nora... all the best and huggs!:)

Lucilla Carrillo

November 2, 2012 at 12:37 PM

Nice poem; i can just imagine to be dancing on the fluffy clouds, than looking down on all the beautiful colors. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 2, 2012 at 6:14 AM

Amazing poetry you have shared with us Leonora. I have enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back Monday to read more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 2, 2012 at 3:34 AM

Lovely Leonora. - Today is yours and you can use it for whatever you want. Have a wonderful day and use the weekend to something fun. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)