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Feeling So Cold

Feeling so cold. Love being split? It can’t happen like that. Her and I, then Him off to the side. Soon him and I will switch places, but she will stay the same. Him has loved her all along, but I have loved her all along too. She says she doesn’t like Him, but I know there’s a glimmer of hope. Soon Her and Him will be happy and I will be nowhere to be seen. Him and Her laughing, smiling, loving, I dying, suffering, missing. They say love lasts forever, then why have I lost it? Where love once was in I’s heart, it was replaced by cold blackness. Love only lasts as long as the two want it…Her didn’t want it to last that long, and yet I did. Her and Him holding hands, I just hold the empty hole where my heart used to be.

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Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 12:17:00 PM

well done with the perfect bond,'

Jaadw Skeiwwa

Date: 10/13/2010 5:22:00 PM

I meant to post this earlier but, I really appreciate all who read my poetry and comment on it but I do ask you to not be too harsh on me. I am only 15 years old and a lot of the poetry I write is based off events in my life and I most are sensitive to me. I do not claim to be a great poet or wish to gain anything from them, I simply write to feel better, Thank You All.