Feeling Seasick

Jan this is a great poem you wrote. So true to your words.I rated it a 7 I am glad you liked my poem.

A classic Jan poem: Superbly written, meaningful subject, and, of course, a touch of poo

ha. the picture certainly depicts it, Jan. Good one.

Pollution seems to be a universal problem, Jan. One can understand when an oil drill ruptures and spills its contents into the sea, but pollution by neglect is an unforgivable offense committed by selfish people. You said a lot in four lines! Great work, Jan. Hugs to you.

Many people are not really aware of what happens to sewage. Some does get special treatment, but ultimately it's got to end somewhere! And, yes, your point about typhoid is a reality! Hugs // paul

It's a sad state that we as human beings, who pride ourselves on being so clever, cannot figure out how to dispose of waste other than polluting our waters. I would say this is a top priority considering our growing population. The Nobel prize should go to the next person who figures that one out! A great message in your poem Jan. ; ) 7

A great display of creativity! I am glad to stumble upon this today.

Oh dear, she's feeling blue//after a swim in the poo//the pristine sea//filled up with pee//is now a soiled stinky slough. YUCK! Huggabuggas ~ j

- ..... did you say contagious .... I feel sick already :)))) - Well done, Jan - Love it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

I'm almost certain that is a crime. I know it happens more than we know. A humorous take on this very important topic, Jan. Well done:)

Lovely imagery, yuck...

It disgusts me as well that I water is polluted.

Yuck!!!!! Jan!!!! Now my stomach is upset, that's not a picture I longed to see in my mind this morning. But I do think you got your point across in a wonderfully imaginative poetic way.