Feeling Peaceful

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What Do You Feel Poetry Contest Sponsor Rick Parise. Posted 12/3/2025

Drowsing on a grassy knoll, gazing out over the meadow I watch the early morning mist dissipate Like milky white vapour of silken gauze rising skyward, filtering through the trees of burnished gold In this the season when trees undress And leaves come swirling down The rough grass where I lie Still damp with a wood sprite’s dewy tears Lulling me like a babe, My weary eyes close, and in this peaceful place I rest

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Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 3/14/2025 1:39:00 AM

Pleasing to behold. The poem is a blessing to the intellect with its vivid imageries and enchanting metaphors. All the best in the contest.

Margaret Foster
Date: 3/14/2025 10:09:00 PM

Many thanks, you comments are truely appreciated.

John Lawless

Date: 3/12/2025 5:27:00 AM

OH YEAH....this demands a FAVE...for it drew me into its picturesque peacefulness while easing me back in my chair exhaling joyfully. Beautifully written Margaret.

Margaret Foster
Date: 3/13/2025 8:11:00 AM

Thank you for reading John. I am pleased you found my effort calming and peaceful. Your comments are very much appreciated. :)