Feeling of Disappointment

I'm not what I promised.
I carry a heavy burden of judgment,
From a shadow of unfulfilled expectations.
Every step, every daze in the shadows,
A painting covered in errors,
While I look for meaning in this sea of uncertainty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Meadows Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Things don't always turn out how we expect them to. A good poem. Well done.
Towett Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:03 AM
Sure. Thank you
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