Marilene Evans Poet Rhyme

Feeling Like a Zero

FEELING LIKE A ZERO

Sometimes, you feel like you
have nothing, zilch; when nothing is going your way.
Makes you blue.

Down you go and
are lost, so low, small, a zero,
so numbed.

Think rich.
You have life, not
zilch.

Sometimes, you feel like you
are lost, so low, small, a zero,
zilch.


4/29/22   Let's Minichu on Zero Poetry
               Mohan Chutani

Used:       How Many Syllables
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Christuraj Alex April 30, 2022 at 9:20 AM "zilch" - Wow! Beautiful! Great work! Marilene Evans May 4, 2022 at 1:33 PM Thanks so much, Christuraj! There is so many who feel empty, like nothing going for them. When they could just really think that they are something, having life and appreciating what they have and go from them instead of thinking what they do not have. Blessings to you.

Rico Leffanta April 29, 2022 at 11:40 AM Fortunately, "there is a season . . . ." a cycle for everything in life, another opportunity to make up for lost time . . . .Aloha! Marilene Evans May 4, 2022 at 1:30 PM Rico, my apologies for responding late. Thanks for visiting. Have a great day. Aloha!