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Feeling Incomplete

human condition feeling a sense of lack seeks change and so strives we are here wish to be elsewhere but imagination too is limited analysis is paralysis so best cease thinking and mindfully begin feeling unfed ego recedes light of our soul dawns we restart life from the scratch

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Silent One

Date: 8/18/2023 8:52:00 AM

Many will relate to your poem and no one should have to feel like this... control the ego and you will find peace..

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/18/2023 7:05:00 PM

let go of ego, yes by shifting into silence. If we control, it is ego again at play.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/18/2023 6:21:00 AM

The eloquence with which this is written, along with its profound insight, highlights the superiority of emotions over rational thought. Well-penned

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/18/2023 7:23:00 AM

Spiritual inquiry essentially requires a shift from head to heart, be it through prayer, meditation or any other chanting or yogic practice. To do so, thoughts should cease altogether or at least slow down considerably