Unseeking Seeker Poet Free verse

Feeling Incomplete

human condition
feeling a sense of lack
seeks change and so strives

we are here
wish to be elsewhere
but imagination too is limited

analysis is paralysis 
so best cease thinking
and mindfully begin feeling

unfed ego recedes
light of our soul dawns
we restart life from the scratch

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Silent One August 18, 2023 at 8:52 AM Many will relate to your poem and no one should have to feel like this... control the ego and you will find peace.. Unseeking Seeker August 18, 2023 at 7:05 PM let go of ego, yes by shifting into silence. If we control, it is ego again at play.

Sotto Poet August 18, 2023 at 6:21 AM The eloquence with which this is written, along with its profound insight, highlights the superiority of emotions over rational thought. Well-penned Unseeking Seeker August 18, 2023 at 7:23 AM Spiritual inquiry essentially requires a shift from head to heart, be it through prayer, meditation or any other chanting or yogic practice. To do so, thoughts should cease altogether or at least slow down considerably