Feeling In the Middle

How do we see when the world is so wet
do we fit in to the lives that are made for us
or are we shadows into the world that we set
with our stars ever so far away
as the memory of begining is gone
to wander the world is a thought to the end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 5, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Jai, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT
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December 5, 2009 at 8:17 AM
Welcome to PS! Good write! Thought-provoking! Peace and love, Audrey
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November 27, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Welcome to soup. Very fine lines that you have presented here this night the day after Thanksgiving. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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November 25, 2009 at 7:43 AM
i read your poem nov 2009'
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November 20, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Pretty good poetry.
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November 20, 2009 at 11:12 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jai. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 20, 2009 at 1:36 AM
Good work philosophical bell'
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