Feeling Blue

Friends comes and goes, people 
live and dies
I have seen days and mornings
Looked as the sunrise and 
watched the moon sets
Can delineate good and can 
describe evils

I have famed pains and can tell 
how much it hurts
Saw death and can tell how 
fearsome its glimpse works
This footnote is a horror but a 
price for my error
For nights I couldn’t sleep just 
to overhear the house breathe

There are spaces, void spaces 
that no one can fill
Some truth, honest words that 
no one can say
Good stuffs, real stuffs that no 
other can teach better than you
You can’t rebuff knowing the 
truth of how much I wanted to 
be with you

Life taught me, how to miss 
someone can really hurt
How I’d to wait that lengthy for 
the space to be filled
Drooling to hear that open truth 
from your heart
But at least don’t deny the fact 
that by you, I’m still loved

Maybe you wanted to see me 
cry for it
Maybe you wanted to hear me 
implore for it
To say it, you already knew how 
hard it was for me
Won’t stop writing about it, till 
you say you still love me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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