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Feeling Blue

In pursuit of happiness, you follow persuasive shadows tethered to the night. And fall into a pit of depression, plunged into darkness where there is no light. Seductive smiles draw you into the dark, where resistance is slowly stripped away. And your innocence is stolen by lies, introducing you to the games fools play. Your pain is numbed by drugs and alcohol, under whose tutelage your heart forgets. And your fragile heart's constantly breaking; shattering into a thousand regrets. Denial obscures your reality; while leaving you puzzled and feeling blue. And you don't know why your life feels empty, for you're blind to what's happening to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/18/2018 10:46:00 AM
This is just amazing, Emile!:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win! Can't wait to buy your book when it becomes available for sale!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/18/2018 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Edward, I now have three books in print and available on Amazon.com my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/21/2018 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on working towards completing your book. It is a great feeling when you finally have I in your hand. My book is now in second print. I wish you much success. This will be a good addition to your manuscript. Check out my site www.wisedummypoet.com
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Date: 8/21/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I will check out your site my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2018 12:19:00 PM
A realistic look at the road many youth take until wisdom pulls them out to find out that they can be much happier on a different path. Of course sadly, some never do leave that life. Wonderfully expressed Emile. : )
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Date: 8/20/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2018 6:29:00 AM
Your memorable lines are locked in one of your best writing forms.. Emile, your sonnet is exquisite!
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Date: 8/20/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2018 1:05:00 PM
'...persuasive shadows tethered to the night...' Great line. A very good write.
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Date: 8/19/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Lawrence, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2018 12:25:00 PM
Wow, Emile - the lines "And innocence, is stolen by the ones who recruit you to play, the games they play." are so powerful.
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Date: 8/19/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Line, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2018 12:14:00 PM
What a heart-breaking, tragic predicament, Émile. ( 'stripped' not 'striped' in case you wish to edit it )
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Date: 8/19/2018 2:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Wendy, I love it when you catch these typos for me my friend, Emile.
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