Feeling Blue

In pursuit of happiness, you follow seductive shadows tethered to the night. And fall into a pit of depression, plunged into darkness, where there is no light. Sensual smiles draw you into the dark, where resistance is slowly stripped away. And your innocence is traded for lies, introducing you to the games fools play. Your pain is numbed by drugs and alcohol, under whose tutelage your heart forgets. For your fragile heart's constantly breaking; shattering into a thousand regrets. Denial obscures your reality; while leaving you puzzled and feeling blue. And you don't know why your life feels empty, for you're blind to what's happening to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ibeh Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 10:46 AM
This is just amazing, Emile!:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win! Can't wait to buy your book when it becomes available for sale!
Pinet Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Thanks Edward, I now have three books in print and available on Amazon.com my friend, Emile.
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August 21, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on working towards completing your book. It is a great feeling when you finally have I in your hand. My book is now in second print. I wish you much success. This will be a good addition to your manuscript. Check out my site www.wisedummypoet.com
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Thanks Richard, I will check out your site my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 12:19 PM
A realistic look at the road many youth take until wisdom pulls them out to find out that they can be much happier on a different path. Of course sadly, some never do leave that life. Wonderfully expressed Emile. : )
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Man Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Your memorable lines are locked in one of your best writing forms.. Emile, your sonnet is exquisite!
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Sharp Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 1:05 PM
'...persuasive shadows tethered to the night...' Great line. A very good write.
Pinet Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Thank you Lawrence, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Wow, Emile - the lines "And innocence, is stolen by the ones who recruit you to play, the games they play." are so powerful.
Pinet Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thanks Line, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Watson Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 12:14 PM
What a heart-breaking, tragic predicament, Émile. ( 'stripped' not 'striped' in case you wish to edit it )
Pinet Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Thanks so much Wendy, I love it when you catch these typos for me my friend, Emile.
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