Feeling Beautiful and Loved

I miss you 
I miss you looking at me
I miss you looking at me with those eyes
I miss you looking at me with those eyes full of joy
I miss you looking at me with those eyes full of joy and love

I know you are here to help me feel beautiful and loved
I know you are here to help me feel 
I know you are here to help 
I know you are here 
I know you 

Always have
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December 16, 2023 at 12:19 AM
This poem called so much weight without being super heavy or lengthy. Brilliant.
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December 16, 2023 at 12:20 AM
*carried-called
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October 27, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Beautifully penned, less is more. Love the way you did this. :)
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October 27, 2023 at 10:18 AM
I like this poem because of its clever use of repetition. It reveals the layers of meaning in our words and how saying less can mean more. Congratulations!
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