Feeling ambitious

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Just a piece of nonsense
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Sitting in the morning sun with my puppy on my knee Eating chocolate biscuits and drinking lang foo tea I think that I might write a book or maybe just a rhyme I feel if I am really quick it shouldn’t take much time but then I look around and see the things that need be done, There’s beds to make, the floor to sweep, the washing not begun How very easy it would be, to ignore it all, be chiller just sit right here with my feet up and write myself a thriller.

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Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 1/28/2025 7:20:00 PM

Like this. I would do the sitting and writing with the pup and tea.

Margaret Foster
Date: 1/29/2025 3:05:00 AM

Thank you Oliver, I decided to have a lazy day.