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Feeling Alive

A poppet swings upon a paradigm of flight. Cruising at an altitude below the starry night. Its wings made out of vines. Its seat reverberates in oak. A poppet’s pure airborne oxygen of sight. 3/14/2018

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Date: 3/15/2018 8:38:00 AM
Unique, Kim, using elements of nature so well to describe your poppet. A breath of fresh air indeed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! :)

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