Feeling

Once to love, much to tears; denotes the journey
Throughout the years; to find the space, the 
Special time, mankind pursues with plans designed
Unsure is oft.' there are ways and falls, spurning the proffered
Doubting all.' In passing thought I cast opine 
Let chance into play, ere the curtains fall..'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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D. Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 10:41 AM
read it
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 3:40 PM
this has an elegant style, Joe. I am glad that you had this one for me to read. I somehow missed it earlier!
Duncan Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 8:05 PM
I write ones like this. Good write :)
Anish Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Fascinating rhyme scheme here! Thank you for your kind words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Muideen Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Wow!! What an extreme beautiful here.... I love how you find a unique way to conveyed your message. Excellent one...........A.M.
Neels Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 4:21 AM
Joe, I love this. So good to be reading you again.. I miss your unique way of getting your point across :) hope your week will be a great one!
Maverick Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Hello Wilma, I am so pleased to hear from you, here's wishing all good things and times..'
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