Feeling

That can't eat, can't sleep, 
can't breathe kind of feeling.
Floating every minute
as you slowly start to fall.

That hands shaking, stupid grinning
lungs feel too small feeling.
Working up a good sweat
as I'm breaking down your walls.

That light headed, so distracted
dizzy kind of feeling.
These butterflies I have 
are chewing such a mighty hole.

That overjoyed, bouncy, happy
bubbly kind of feeling.
So lovely, sweet and deafening
this music in my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 1, 2008 at 9:41 AM
he deserves to be loved that much :-)
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