Feel the Heavens

As if the sea calmed his tides to lie down in peace
As if the thunders began to sing sweet lullabies
As if the flared up volcano spouted jasmine and lilies
Serenity sits on his face when he sleeps. 

In the stillness of the night, when the fierce lion gently hugs his love,
He sleeps like a king dozing in the tranquility of his queen's lap. 

Like a feeble creeper that fondly cuddles the mighty banyan
He folds himself, as he sleeps like a baby in the mother's womb. 

The nap-time charm on his face is a mug of morning coffee
The peace on his closed eyelids is the midnight's melody
The rhythm of his breath sets stage for a splendid salsa 
Simple curve on his dreaming lips turns down the charm of Cinderella. 

When he sleeps, 
he glitters like a white pearl in the garland of black beads,
he shines like a daisy in the garden of violets,
his face resembles a magic wand cut and run from a magician's sleeve
he appears like a peace treaty that ends an incessant battle. 

A good book in a nightstand
A mild balm on chapped lips
A peaceful hour of meditation
A plate full of delightful candies
A cosy bed in a cradle
A warm blanket on shivering skin - All have knocked my door,
Said that they can't wait anymore,
to witness on his face, the dance of pleasance. 
I genially welcomed them to feel the heavens. 

I let them all to see him along with me
Their hearts were filled with eternal glee.

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Date: 5/9/2022 1:23:00 PM
A wonderful write. Your pen was working overtime. Have a great/blessed week............
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Date: 3/12/2022 10:30:00 PM
My mind flowed and my heart opened while reading this touching intense and magical poem . Thank you for the gift of your words Swetha ! Susan :)
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Date: 2/24/2022 5:12:00 AM
Your Imagery is intense Swetha, your whole poem simply charming, yet awesomly dazzling 'the nap time charm on his face is a mug of morning coffee.......the rhythm of his breath sets stage for a splendid salsa.' Wonderful poetry my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/22/2022 9:58:00 AM
An incredible pen here " In the stillness of the night, when the fierce lion gently hugs his love, He sleeps like a king dozing in the tranquility of his queen's lap. "
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:23:00 PM
Absolutely and aptly astonishing imagery Swetha! To read and read again, over and over... and still there's more to explore. A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 2/21/2022 7:43:00 AM
Sweta, enjoyed the way he sleeps with the calmness of a baby. All the images you have brought in are catchy, but I prefer the line-"He appears like a peace treaty that ends an incessant battle" the most.
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Date: 2/21/2022 6:12:00 AM
Dear Swetha, your poem is dazzling with excellent imageries and metaphors. Loved your poetic style. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 2/21/2022 5:08:00 AM
Amazing imagery and lovely metaphors Swetha.... So beautifully written...
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Date: 2/21/2022 4:34:00 AM
I felt those heavens Swetha.
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Date: 2/19/2022 1:40:00 PM
Spectacular imagery! Swetha. Robert
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Date: 2/18/2022 11:50:00 AM
The imagery of this beautiful poem is exquisite, Swetha. It's a fave for me. Best wishes, Evelyn :)
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Date: 2/19/2022 1:03:00 AM
Thanks much Evelyn :)
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