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Feel the Adrenalin

Planet Earth has become scary and unlivable, So why not try something that is unbelievable Thinking of buying a one way ticket to Mars, To The Milky Way Dairy who sell Milky Bars, All my poetic friends would be invited along, Where we’ll create and dream, united and strong, What an awesome getaway trip this would be, Just our families, our muses, you and me!

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 4/27/2021 6:36:00 PM

Why not? Great escape with your humor, and then I'm left dangling, wanting more.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 4/11/2021 11:49:00 AM

Incredible. This one is going to my fav list. Just imagine, from moon to Mars, then to the ends of Milky away.. Imagine the calm, imagine the beauty, and the company of your loved ones... Wow... Loved this poem...

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/26/2021 11:35:00 AM

Sounds wonderful, count me in on trip to Mars Jennifer, oh for those Milky Bars ~ Hugs, Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/26/2021 10:24:00 AM

Leave a seat for me. This earth is bound to be destroyed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2021 1:44:00 AM

- Where can I buy a ticket? - Lovely and fun journey, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 3/25/2021 1:34:00 AM

Love this Jennifer. I'm ready when you are. Waitaminute, What if we run out of air? God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/25/2021 12:35:00 PM

Well this is a fantasy idea, so I guess we have bottles of earths oxygen on our space ship! I love your comment my friend - Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/24/2021 10:10:00 AM

Hi Jennifer, I don't know what happened because I commented on this write. Sign me up, let me go get packed. Who wouldn't want to go to such a place? I enjoyed this fun, packed, adventure-filled write. Well done, my friend:-)Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/25/2021 12:44:00 PM

Alexis my dear dear friend, how could I leave without you - just imagine , we would be "Far from the Madding crowd". Hugs and blessings,

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/23/2021 6:06:00 AM

What fun! I'll sign up! Great thoughts Jenn :) Linda

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/23/2021 2:37:00 AM

Haha... Love this Jenni... Iam in... Prayers and Hugs.. ~ Ani

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 3/22/2021 1:00:00 PM

Im in Jen Sounds like 1 hell of a ride Hugs and blessings

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2021 12:57:00 PM

Save me a ticket! I am so ready, and Trixie is too! "All my poetic friends would be invited along, Where we’ll create and dream, united and strong," This is fabulous!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/21/2021 10:41:00 AM

Great pen Jennifer, it really gives one great aspirations to get away from our tired old earth. Do I come and pick you up down in S.A. or do you come and pick me up in Scotland?!!! Take care, blessings always,Gordon

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/20/2021 9:07:00 PM

Hello Jennifer … fun write indeed. Unfortunately there is truth in it with the way we are destroying our habitat. Pleased to read Elias is doing well - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2021 3:48:00 PM

love this one, Jennifer. Short and sweet. Would be a great trip.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2021 2:22:00 PM

I'm on my way especially with the lure of chocolate lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/20/2021 6:00:00 AM

Put my name down Jennifer, earth has had it. Tom PS. Is Elias home now?

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/20/2021 10:35:00 AM

Fasten your seat-belt Tom we will soon be in space, isn't poetry awesome, we can imagine and write about, fantasy as easily as if it were a reality. Elias is back and is op was so serious, but he looks brilliant and even drives. Modern medicine has leaped forward in some areas, yet cancer and epidemics are are slowly devastating our world's population. Thank you my friend for your prayers and kind thoughts. Blessings, Jennifer - Soup mail.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/20/2021 4:23:00 AM

Wonder if after a while we'll dirty everywhere :) Hope your husband is alright. My prayers with him.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/20/2021 10:38:00 AM

Thank you for your concern for Elias - very thoughtful Victor. Jenn.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/20/2021 10:24:00 AM

I bet you are right Victor my friend, back now but not as actively which I am sad about, however too many businesses are doing bad, ours is doing OK but we have to nurse it. Will visit your page shortly. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.