Notes About The Poem

A form of poetry created by poet Robert Keim in 2008. It is a 50-line poem of
short phrases and images. The "Blitz" poem is well-named, as the fifty short
lines are read in rapid-fire fashion. “The form really relies on sound and
rapid "flow." ~Rob Keim.
Here are the rules:
Line 1 should be one short phrase or image (like “build a boat”)
Line 2 should be another short phrase or image using the same first word as the
first word in Line 1 (something like “build a house”)
Lines 3 and 4 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 2
as their first words (so Line 3 might be “house for sale” and Line 4 might be
“house for rent”)
Lines 5 and 6 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 4
as their first words, and so on until you’ve made it through 48 lines
Line 49 should be the last word of Line 48
Line 50 should be the last word of Line 47
The title of the poem should be three words long and follow this format: (first
word of Line 3) (preposition or conjunction) (first word of line 47)
There should be no punctuation, except for an ellipses after the final two words
in lines 49 & 50.

 

 

Feel of Character

I still recall
I still feel
Feel the pain
Feel the strength
Strength of mind
Strength of spirit
Spirit kept me alive
Spirit that fought
Fought as an underdog
Fought against chance
Chance to breathe
Chance to shine
Shine to heal
Shine like stars
Stars that delight
Stars that inspire
Inspire to create
Inspire self-belief
Self-belief ends doubt
Self-belief helps to succeed
Succeed against setbacks
Succeed to progress
Progress for dreams
Progress for fate
Fate is in our hands
Fate can take time
Time never stops
Time can be a nemesis
Nemesis full of ego
Nemesis we can defeat
Defeat can deflate
Defeat has lessons
Lessons to stop mistakes
Lessons I've learned
Learned to mature
Learned to heal my soul
Soul is silent
Soul is poetry
Poetry is my catharsis
Poetry is my truth
Truth sets you free
Truth brings justice
Justice for the oppressed
Justice needs principles
Principles give us morals
Principles define character
Character gets us through life
Character brings love
Love...
Life...
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Ashley Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 7:54 PM
Dear Silent One, you have delivered a brilliant blitz poem! The essence of your verse flows seamlessly from line to line retaining its pace, strength and message throughout. A fantastic, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Your last four lines are golden for a great finale. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Poet Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 2:23 PM
The power of truth liberates individuals, while also ensuring a fair and just society that fights against oppression. However, it is important to remember that the pursuit of justice must always be guided by ethical principles. Your message resonates with me, as you have successfully captured the essence of a profound and seamless expression. Congratulations on your win.
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 7:04 AM
WoW! This is such a cool form and you did it so well. Love the way it flows from one word to the next. Loved this my friend. God Bless and Happy New Year. JB
Mcintosh Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 4:43 AM
AMAZING. love it. Congrats to you. love and prayers, God bless you too. Love, Gina
Empress Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 8:52 PM
What a brilliant blitz this is! I truly loved the flow of your lines and the truth woven here, so sincere and so seamless! Theres so many lines that made me go whoa! And it reads like breath of fresh air! You truly are so gifted and good with these blitz, i felt the ones about fate, how fate is in our hands and it can take time, sounds comforting as sometimes we might feel like it is not! And about time… it surely feels this way right now that time never stops and time can be our nemesis!
Empress Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 8:53 PM
This year i hope many will find justice and will feel less oppressed in a world that can leave one feeling oppressed .. love this! Another fave
Herrick Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 8:42 PM
? :) Now this is poem alchemy pole position to finish strong. "...Soul is silent Soul is poetry Poetry is my catharsis Poetry is my truth Truth sets you free Truth brings justice Justice for the oppressed Justice needs principles Principles give us morals Principles define character Character gets us through life Character brings love Love... Life... "!" (Victory Lap ??)
Brotherton Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 4:53 PM
It seems there is no boundary your talent can not conquer, my friend. A brilliant poem my friend.
Hind Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Deeply portrayed, "Love life"- and the flow was beautiful and honest.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 1:08 PM
WOW!!! What a write. Love This One. Thanks for the information on the top. Something new for me. I could feel your character. Have a blessed day writing away in 24................
Pandit Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 6:26 AM
Truth sets you free Truth brings justice Justice for the oppressed Justice needs principles--I like your message, SO. You achieved the sound and rapid flow you speak of.
Rose  Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 6:18 AM
I just listened to the song, wow, xo
Rose  Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 6:17 AM
wow I have a hard time keeping up with you S O, oh but I do admire, have a great day love
Magdalinos Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 5:45 AM
Hello Silent One, an excellent poem!! Have a blessed,creative new year!!
One Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, all the best..
Sharma  Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Ahh, dear Silent One, you are inspiring me to try more poetic forms, I've been wanting to write a blitz ever since I read your previous one.. But, reading this, oh my, it's absolutely amazing! I might have to re-think about writing one now..This one is very deep with moving emotions as dwells in the dimensions that speak of resilience whilst incorporating every line with wisdom.. Love the flow of this, it's honestly so brilliant!! I especially love "Soul is poetry", "Time can be a nemesis" Wow
One Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 6:07 AM
Thank you Hiya, I really like this form.. so you can imagine there will be a contest coming up soon.. I look forward to your blitz.
Sharma  Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 5:39 AM
So thought provoking and inspiring in many ways! I'm awestruck by your artistic poetic skills.. "Poetry is my truth", "Justice needs principles" Woah, so many spectrums you've dealt with here.. Absolutely wondrous and it's definitely another FAV for me :)
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