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poem submitted to "Actualization of Affection" poetry contrst, Ink Empress, sponsor, May 15, 2026. 

FEEL ME IN MY SILENCE

Can you feel me in my silence?
I hold my words like fragile glass~  
unclear which ones will agitate,   
unsure if truth will cost too much.  

I wait, my patience wearing thin.  
Can you feel me in my silence?
I want to speak, but shadows rise;
and every thought retreats again.

I reach for courage, lose my grip.  
I stall, falter, then hesitate.
Can you feel me in my silence?
I do not want to disappear.

I hope you hear the pain I hide~
the ache behind my quiet breath,  
the fear that love might break again.  
Can you feel me in my silence?
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Hind Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 6:34 PM
this is an amazing version of this form. well done, poetess <3
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 5:45 AM
What a wonderful form ~ you certainly did it justice, Sara
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