Feel Me

Can you feel me?
Touch me
Can you feel me now?
It's my soul
Slipping away
Slowly, softly
Like a snake I slither
Into the depths of hell
Touch me
One last time
Can you feel me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pierce-Guzman Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 6:23 PM
Wow the imagery of this poem is amazing! I feel your sense of aching for understanding. I look forward to reading more:) thank you for sharing!!!
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