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Feel Me

Can you feel me? Touch me Can you feel me now? It's my soul Slipping away Slowly, softly Like a snake I slither Into the depths of hell Touch me One last time Can you feel me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/29/2012 6:23:00 PM
Wow the imagery of this poem is amazing! I feel your sense of aching for understanding. I look forward to reading more:) thank you for sharing!!!
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