Feel Me

Feel me, my rough and bitter creeks, dark wholes 
and covered up pain. Days of havoc I can't breathe,
scream for a change why let darkness get the best 
of me. Feel me, feel me breathe.

Do you believe every life has a destiny? 
Fear not that they dreams might come true, nothing over
takes me, the world has so much to offer you. Doors opened,
how would I explain that to the world, breathe, one step 
at a time. Discouragement doesn't live here, only high hopes
and dreams for tomorrow. Feel me, feel me breathe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mchattie Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Wonderful poem. Such imagery. Enjoyed it a lot. Have a great day.
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