Feel Like Dancing

The evening clear, but moonless, with watchful eyes
Appear impenetrable through the city
Drawing attention to street lights rosiness
                           night out with my date

Giddy spirits, move on for one more sweet song
Swiftly dipping honey into our solo
Blaring base music beat flow down to our feet
                           we danced to the beat

The wind would blow alluring strands of our soul
Seductively weaving like a candle flame 
It danced provocatively fondled the depth
                           left us contented

A breath, a rosy blushing dawn appearing
To slumber, under shadows of hidden walls
In whisper snores in unruffled engagement
                           we sleep until noon

7/18/2020

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NOT for Edward's contest just Brian's contest
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a way to go, your dancing pen with music. Enjoy your win and day with a hug..............
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Excellent Sapphic Stanza, Eve! Now write another one just like this for my contest;-) Good luck!
Rose  Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 6:33 PM
It all reads fine by me, winning wishes dear Eve. hope all is well, hugs xo
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