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Feel Empty

Feel Empty The tear ducts begin their works Heart aches Cracked slightly but not broken Head throbbing Thoughts swirl around unanswered What happened He was just so good to you Everybody makes mistakes And it's not all on him It's as if, In one day the inner workings Of the world fall apart one on top of the other And you freeze in the moment No way to stop it No way No way When things finally start moving again You move with them Robotic no thoughts just Emptiness Aching Throbbing Happenings... And the world just keeps turning

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Date: 11/19/2009 12:57:00 PM
Nicely done sad write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/18/2009 2:22:00 PM
That empty trance like state is a hard thing to shake...I still havent found a woman who can shake me from that damage the last one did. But there is solace in writing and always better days ahead where the sun is brighter and the blood pumps in you veigns like you never thought it could....I felt this write completey. Nice job Miss Jen Much love, Steve
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