Jen H. Poet Free verse

Feel Empty

Feel Empty
The tear ducts begin their works
Heart aches
Cracked slightly but not broken
Head throbbing
Thoughts swirl around unanswered
What happened
He was just so good to you
Everybody makes mistakes
And it's not all on him
It's as if,
In one day the inner workings 
Of the world fall apart one on top of the other
And you freeze in the moment
No way to stop it
No way
No way
When things finally start moving again
You move with them
Robotic no thoughts just
Emptiness
Aching
Throbbing
Happenings...
And the world just keeps turning

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Sara Kendrick November 19, 2009 at 12:57 PM Nicely done sad write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Steve Voorhees November 18, 2009 at 2:22 PM That empty trance like state is a hard thing to shake...I still havent found a woman who can shake me from that damage the last one did. But there is solace in writing and always better days ahead where the sun is brighter and the blood pumps in you veigns like you never thought it could....I felt this write completey. Nice job Miss Jen Much love, Steve