Vilmos Zoltan Galyo Poet Free verse

Feel

Feel

Just feel, feel life
Feel, feel
Only feel, feel life
Feel, feel

Gate, closed, locked
Way, way
Open it, oh my loved
Path, yours

Remember a mind
Hoped you
You. The only rainbow
A water flow


Hmm. Step through the gate
Hmm. My life. Heart. A love

Feel. A lost
Living
Deleted love

Drop
Just drop me
Delete my love

Hmm
Hmm

Open
Close

The
Gate

I loved
You

You
You

Just 
You

Step
The gate

Field
Meadow

Life
Die

Gate
Locked

Where is love?
Where?
I need you

Hmm
Hmm

I understand
Understand now

You aren’t a real soul
Liar

Hmm
Hmm

I hope
Hoped you

Gate. You, meadow, gate
Far, far, from my life
Far from my love

Can you walk there?

Beating
Field

Ghost
Walk

Feel
Alone

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Daniel Henry Rodgers December 19, 2025 at 10:23 AM Hello Zoltan, I found myself moved by how you let the words stand raw, fragmented, yet insistent like the heart refusing to stop speaking even when silence surrounds it. That honesty is powerful. Holiday Blessings, Zoltan, Danie