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Feel

It started in silence—until hunger twisted through her, and stillness came alive
His heart crashed into hers—igniting, a forge to survive
He fled the grayscale of before—chasing a love only others get to feel
She was made to burn bright—but for him; she’d rip the world of the rest of its appeal
She found devotion in his touch—in the way he made her believe in, raw, real, and rife
No magic, no fate—just two haunted souls clawing their way back to life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 10:34 PM
Beautiful writing, A.S. Wraps around you, it really does make you feel
Scorpio Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 4:05 PM
I wish I knew how to write what a hug should feel like...A.S.
Lane Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 4:51 PM
Where there was only emptiness, passion was forged… their hunger sated. Raw, real and rife with a look, a touch. It was everything.
Scorpio Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Hugs! Metaphorically and literally... A.S.
Lane Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Yes, and fortunate those who have it.
Scorpio Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 5:45 PM
She is everything well past what most consider something... this is what life should be all about— Warmly A.S.
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