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Sun sets, sky glows cerise. Throw the nets, catch showpiece. Fish abound, birds take off All fly round, it's payoff Birds last meal, night is nigh Strange feel, gratified high. 17 August 2021 Image 1 6 syllables per line. Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2021 7:35:00 PM

Back with congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve

Joseph May

Date: 8/28/2021 3:59:00 PM

Very nicely done Victor, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/28/2021 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2021 3:46:00 PM

oh how did I ever miss this one? Love it, Victor.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/20/2021 12:13:00 AM

Fantastic verse, Victor, a winner for sure.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/19/2021 11:57:00 AM

I like this uplifting piece, needed it today. Thanks and good luck in the contest.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/19/2021 2:58:00 AM

So beautifully penned Victor. Each line so apt for the given picture... Am sure this is a winner.. Best wishes... God bless... ~ Ani

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/18/2021 9:42:00 PM

Lovely scene you paint with your descriptive words, Victor:)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/17/2021 11:20:00 PM

This was a good contest with the photographs. Very nice Victor...You say that you cannot write haiku but you almost have one here. .......... Sun sets, sky glows red/Throw the nets, catch a showpiece/ Fish abound, birds fly.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/17/2021 5:05:00 PM

A beautiful portrayal of the sunset dinner hour. So well done, Victor. Hugs. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2021 3:02:00 PM

what wonderful imagery and you got the internal rhyme in too, still got to finish my effort!:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/17/2021 10:20:00 AM

Stunning images within your verse ~ truly set the scene. I sense a winner here dear Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/17/2021 7:57:00 AM

beautiful Victor... i could see the scene and loved what i saw :) hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/17/2021 7:34:00 AM

Victor, you're a very talented poet who never ceases to amaze. You gave us great Layers of pictures, especially the cerise sky, which was beautifully described. You've produced an amazing sight out of this picture—deepest hopes for a win.