Victor Buhagiar Poet Verse

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Feeding Time

Sun sets, sky glows cerise.
Throw the nets, catch showpiece.
     Fish abound, birds take off
     All fly round, it's payoff
Birds last meal, night is nigh
Strange feel, gratified high.


17 August 2021

Image 1
6 syllables per line.
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Eve Roper August 28, 2021 at 7:35 PM Back with congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve

Joseph May August 28, 2021 at 3:59 PM Very nicely done Victor, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith August 28, 2021 at 8:55 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2021 at 3:46 PM oh how did I ever miss this one? Love it, Victor.

Eve Roper August 20, 2021 at 12:13 AM Fantastic verse, Victor, a winner for sure.

M. L. Kiser August 19, 2021 at 11:57 AM I like this uplifting piece, needed it today. Thanks and good luck in the contest.

Anitha Jayasankar August 19, 2021 at 2:58 AM So beautifully penned Victor. Each line so apt for the given picture... Am sure this is a winner.. Best wishes... God bless... ~ Ani

Joanna Daniel August 18, 2021 at 9:42 PM Lovely scene you paint with your descriptive words, Victor:)

Delice Arleen Skelly August 17, 2021 at 11:20 PM This was a good contest with the photographs. Very nice Victor...You say that you cannot write haiku but you almost have one here. .......... Sun sets, sky glows red/Throw the nets, catch a showpiece/ Fish abound, birds fly.

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 17, 2021 at 5:05 PM A beautiful portrayal of the sunset dinner hour. So well done, Victor. Hugs. :D

Jan Allison August 17, 2021 at 3:02 PM what wonderful imagery and you got the internal rhyme in too, still got to finish my effort!:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour August 17, 2021 at 10:20 AM Stunning images within your verse ~ truly set the scene. I sense a winner here dear Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sandra Adams August 17, 2021 at 7:57 AM beautiful Victor... i could see the scene and loved what i saw :) hugs

Sotto Poet August 17, 2021 at 7:34 AM Victor, you're a very talented poet who never ceases to amaze. You gave us great Layers of pictures, especially the cerise sky, which was beautifully described. You've produced an amazing sight out of this picture—deepest hopes for a win.

Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2021 at 6:39 AM Lovely! Cerise cheers!

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2021 at 5:49 AM Layers of images paint this short story. Well written rhymes--apt for the contest theme. Your talented writes never disappoint, Victor.

Beryl Edmonds August 17, 2021 at 5:32 AM Lovely words in your lovely verse Victor, a beautiful picture painted on the readers mind… Hugs, Belle

Mystic Rose Rose August 17, 2021 at 3:45 AM nicely penned you gave me a picture perfect image, especially the cerise sky, that is my fav :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2021 at 3:08 AM - A beautiful sight, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham August 17, 2021 at 2:39 AM Can just picture the scene Victor, a feeding frenzy. Tom