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Feeding the Whales

~ " " " " whales ~ When rafting across the ocean please don't feed the sharks For advice on feeding whales ~ see the above ditto marks

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Ann Foster

Date: 11/1/2019 2:54:00 AM

lol... so true... this was a fun one. Hugs. Ann

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2019 11:32:00 AM

Ha, ha: One hot air balloon coming right up, Ann. Its name is 'Gershon Wolf.' --- My wife tells me I'm full of hot air... ~ All Steamed Up

Ann Foster
Date: 11/1/2019 2:55:00 AM

You have a hot air balloon????

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2019 9:46:00 AM

I do not plan to ever raft across an ocean; I saw the Titanic movie, and I do not want to be in a ship on an ocean either. Cleverly done.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2019 1:23:00 PM

How about I take you for a ride across the Chicago drainage ditch in my brand-new, super-souped-up, state-of-the-art, Jules Verne certified-safe hot air balloon? Whooppee! Yadda-yadda, Gershon

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 10/29/2019 12:37:00 PM

Hm, the first line, as far as I see, is a tail, the fountains the whale does and the whale itself. P.S.: As Kipling used to say in his "Just so stories": "Don't set out to sea if you don't have suspenders")

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2019 4:17:00 PM

Kipling sure knew what he was talking about there. ~ Gershon

David Mchattie

Date: 10/28/2019 8:42:00 PM

I have an unnatural fear of sharks which is odd since I live in Saskatchewan which is as far from the ocean as you can get. Have a great night my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2019 11:30:00 AM

Thanks for the funny comment, although you never know when a 'Land Shark' might pop up in your neck of the woods. LOL. Thanks, David. Best wishes, Gershon

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/28/2019 8:24:00 PM

i am not rafting across the ocean to become whale or shark bait...lol...i will stand guard at the shore my friend and take videos from a drone... :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2019 11:30:00 AM

I figured you probably didn't have a raft-the-ocean voyage scheduled anytime soon. This poem was just in case! LOL. Thanks, Sandra. :) gw