Feeding the Ducklings

The ducklings waited expectantly,
Hungrily and wearily,
They saw the bread from afar, 
Feeding time! Here they came,

The race began,
They flapped and squawked,
Biting and scrapping
Argued and squabbled,

Aggressively they told each other,
Back off it’s mine!
Hunger had turned them wild, 
As they all headed to the child,

She stood there,
Innocently waiting
Excited as they came,
Throwing the bread

All fighting for first place,
Greedily snatching 
As much as they could
And attacking each other,

She tried to share the crumbs evenly
So the weakest got some,
As the hungry beaks snatched,
She felt sorry for some,

Her bread was gone,
She thought tomorrow again,
As the scene changed,
And calmness came.

10/05/2016
For contest 
Sponsor Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 17, 2016 at 5:53 PM
WENDY, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
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July 18, 2016 at 3:11 AM
Thank you Skat xxxx
Callus Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 8:47 AM
You described this scene so well that you gave it life, Wendy! Children enjoy feeding the ducks, while the ducks enjoy being fed:) ~ Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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June 12, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Thank you paul and sorry for the delay in thanking you I have prob don't get alerts anymore don't know why xxxx
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June 6, 2016 at 1:33 AM
Wendy, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Rycroft Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Eve I cannot check any contest I' m having problems with my page x thank you xxxx
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 3:45 PM
this is wonderful, wendy . By the way, I always loved the name Wendy!!
Rycroft Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Hi thank you Andrea I always wanted another name x I feel like wendy in peter pan x ha ha x But we have to live with it Who would call there daughter wendy x
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May 30, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Wendy, this is such a good poem a 7. Read my blog for how I felt. Hugs eve
Rycroft Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Eve you're so kind xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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May 29, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Hi Wendy Now I've time to get back to poetry again. Loved your poem on feeding the ducklings. Reminds me of my early childhood when my mum used to take me to Yeadon Tarn with bread for the ducks. Tony x.
Rycroft Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Thank you Tony x great to hear from you again x where have you been x
Laurie Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 7:22 PM
G'day Wendy ... nice description Wendy of a typical scene in a park with a lake where ducks are fed - good job - Lindsay
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May 11, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Thank you Lindsay xx
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:49 PM
I agree with Barry - very descriptive write Wendy - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Rycroft Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thank you Jan xxx
Stebbings Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 4:31 PM
Very descriptive, well written piece, Wendy. Good luck in the competition
Rycroft Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Thank you Barry nice to meet you x
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