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Feeding Frenzy

fresh air sugar free 
falling raindrops hit the sea
salt water esprit 
bubbles burst fish disagree
surface tension stirs melee 


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David Kavanagh

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Sara Kendrick

December 27, 2022 at 12:10 PM

Wow!! I like this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara

David Kavanagh

December 27, 2022 at 12:13 PM

Thank you Sara, I was trying to add a little spice to the feeding frenzy, cheers David

Deb M

December 21, 2022 at 11:51 PM

Perfectly described In a little amount of words David! Nice one…Debx

David Kavanagh

December 22, 2022 at 1:22 AM

Thanks Deb, always a little tension on the surface, it’s what keeps us going in a world of frenzy lol, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

December 21, 2022 at 2:11 PM

Remind me if those wildlife programmes where you see shoals of small fish becoming dinner for whales, sharks and birds, a free for all. Good luck in the contest. Tom P S soupmail.

Tom Cunningham

December 21, 2022 at 11:43 PM

At least the snow has gone and temps rising, - 10 here last week.

David Kavanagh

December 21, 2022 at 2:35 PM

Thanks Tom, I got that mail, this one just jumped into my head for some unknown reason, must be the lashing rain outside lol, cheers David