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Feeding Frenzy

fresh air sugar free falling raindrops hit the sea salt water esprit bubbles burst fish disagree surface tension stirs melee By David Kavanagh

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2022 12:10:00 PM

Wow!! I like this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/27/2022 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Sara, I was trying to add a little spice to the feeding frenzy, cheers David

Deb M

Date: 12/21/2022 11:51:00 PM

Perfectly described In a little amount of words David! Nice one…Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2022 1:22:00 AM

Thanks Deb, always a little tension on the surface, it’s what keeps us going in a world of frenzy lol, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/21/2022 2:11:00 PM

Remind me if those wildlife programmes where you see shoals of small fish becoming dinner for whales, sharks and birds, a free for all. Good luck in the contest. Tom P S soupmail.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/21/2022 11:43:00 PM

At least the snow has gone and temps rising, - 10 here last week.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/21/2022 2:35:00 PM

Thanks Tom, I got that mail, this one just jumped into my head for some unknown reason, must be the lashing rain outside lol, cheers David