Rena Kiya Poet Narrative

Feed Upon My Soul

*Note this is not sexual. succubus feed on emotion not all of them use sex as a method.this one uses touch to suck out emotions  *

 As I lay on the soft moss your body beside mine. 
your cool hands on my breast
 your mouth hovering over my heart 
you feed upon the black and 
crimson mist that rises from my heart 

Full of hatred ,agony ,pain , sorrow 
and lust the lust for blood that consumes me
 this mist this congealed darkness 
that has conquered my heart 
upon which you feed so lustfully 
releasing me from its burden 
its dark chains; you feed on emotions 
taking my burden for your sustenance 

my feelings, for you wil never leave me thank you for all you've done.
 you can feed upon my soul any time there will always be some thing for you
at least the darkness insde me is has brought one good thing to me: you

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Terry O'Leary May 30, 2012 at 1:55 PM Another fine (dark) work... I think you are very talented... Terry

Alanna Elgood May 10, 2012 at 8:34 AM Wow this is great work, thanks for your review of my poem too, we do have similar take on the images of pain and suffering. Great work and enjoyed the visions your poem conjured up.

David Williams May 9, 2012 at 10:28 AM Wolf still very romantic..David Rena Kiya May 9, 2012 at 12:25 PM its not supossed to be romantic its dark and about pain & suffering & how cratures that cuase it can make also takit from you