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Couple Shivering Outdoors Winter Rubbing Hands Stock Photo 1171656964 |  Shutterstock

Billows of a winter snow blowing through my curtain window all I sweet remember is the way the willow tree smelled that creamy, sugary, wintergreen scent of its lovely mellow and the way the sun tilted each time you looked at me... Snowflakes falling from a heavy laden sky of marble and though my heart is longing, it is full of your song that slow jazz music made us drunk as we danced beneath the sultry moon, like a a fork and spoon February shivers, my how the winter defuses all that is left is the scent of a warmth remembered healing hands, *** secret pillow talks You grew old I grew old, then we both stopped living My how I recall those winter snaps, two young lovers lost in the silk of life's entwine I remember when our love was fresh and new like the weeping willow, dressed to the nines Ah ! But those were different times and now is now, I am presently lost, ... in this winter pow.

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Date: 2/9/2023 9:31:00 AM
Those were the days, as the famous Mary Hopkins sang back in 1968. A song I'll never forget. Meantime I admire your great imagery. Hugs xx
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Date: 2/9/2023 6:08:00 AM
Reminiscing in days of youth--I hear the joy and the regret:--You grew old I grew old, then we both stopped living...
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Date: 2/9/2023 8:52:00 AM
Thankyou for taking the time to leave a comment Vijay, I appreciate your visit kindly, :)

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