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Poetic Form: Questionku

Inspired: 2023 February 11

Image: That Box of Chocolates by Gina Real Life

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

February 15th

Chocolaty sweets for my sweety, Fragrant beauties for my beauty, Why the long face, hello?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mcintosh Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 2:58 PM
enjoyed. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 3:40 PM
Appreciate the extended courtesy, Gina, Aloha, William
Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 11:43 AM
A fun write. On Feb 15 the candy/sweets are 1/2 price. Hooray!!! I really enjoyed this. Hope you are OK. Have a great day writing away.............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 12:50 PM
AOK Wilco, Paula, a poked explanative at my present status--all in jest--a great day to you too, Aloha, William
Poet Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 5:15 AM
I have high hopes that this indicates that you are feeling better and that the therapy you discussed in your blog has been successful.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 6:52 AM
The visual aspects are in bits and pieces but to lessen the straining, I take sleeping meds so as to not overuse said eye, nor the rubbing of it due to the irritable eye drops lest I tear the sutures. I'll contend with this struggle until the end of the month, but recent moments of perfected vision were successful--ecstatic--though short-lived, like I said, bits and pieces. The questionku hints towards that fact--jokingly, Aloha, William
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 3:32 AM
Now I wonder why the long face? Now I get it, ROTFL...Three days too late. Reads like a winning work to me. I hope you have planned ahead you know thnk. I enjoyed this one and your visit to my page. I think the crows in that painting were telling me to always go to the right side of anything in life. Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 6:29 AM
I referenced my surgery in the blog I posted on the homepage.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 6:19 AM
The questionku's about my recent eye surgery and the difficulty that it presents itself in a jocular fashion. Of the crows, it's not the bird per se, but their 'voicing' - crows, and as you stated a directive of the right side. Crows do bear a mystique connotation, as well as, your husband's version but it's the former that people find them to be alluring birds. I appreciate your extended thoughts and clarity, and you're always welcome, Aloha William
Dutta Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 7:06 PM
No long face . But broad smile. Loved and enjoyed.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Lol, nice and sweet, Anisha, Aloha, William
Scorpio Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 6:17 PM
This made me smile appreciating you well written! A.S.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Considerable thanks, A.S., as this questionku defines my blog I posted on the home page, mahalo and Aloha, William
Volumes Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 5:24 PM
Loved your little Questionku. I am so hoping this means you are better and the treatment that you mentioned in your blog has worked. Is the long face because you were a day late ? You know that is quite unforgivable ? Someone waited for 24 hours, while those around were receiving candy and flowers. You simply MUST get it right next year. Cheers from Wendy. Welcome back.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 6:51 PM
Lol, Wendy, as my recent surgery and drops that'll taper at month's end affect my vision, it does bear a comfortable fallback that benefits reasonably, or faults reliably. [Continues]
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 6:49 PM
[Continued] Referencing said blog, the metrical entries are quite extensive. Rereads constants trailing thoughts does little justice as visual and mental aspects clash, hence, this questionku defines my predicament. Thanks for this great feedback, Aloha, William
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