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Poetic Form: Questionku

Inspired: 2023 February 11

Image: That Box of Chocolates by Gina Real Life

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Chocolaty sweets for my sweety,
Fragrant beauties for my beauty,
Why the long face, hello?

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/12/2023 2:58:00 PM

enjoyed. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2023 3:40:00 PM

Appreciate the extended courtesy, Gina, Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2023 11:43:00 AM

A fun write. On Feb 15 the candy/sweets are 1/2 price. Hooray!!! I really enjoyed this. Hope you are OK. Have a great day writing away.............

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2023 12:50:00 PM

AOK Wilco, Paula, a poked explanative at my present status--all in jest--a great day to you too, Aloha, William

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/12/2023 5:15:00 AM

I have high hopes that this indicates that you are feeling better and that the therapy you discussed in your blog has been successful.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2023 6:52:00 AM

The visual aspects are in bits and pieces but to lessen the straining, I take sleeping meds so as to not overuse said eye, nor the rubbing of it due to the irritable eye drops lest I tear the sutures. I'll contend with this struggle until the end of the month, but recent moments of perfected vision were successful--ecstatic--though short-lived, like I said, bits and pieces. The questionku hints towards that fact--jokingly, Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2023 3:32:00 AM

Now I wonder why the long face? Now I get it, ROTFL...Three days too late. Reads like a winning work to me. I hope you have planned ahead you know thnk. I enjoyed this one and your visit to my page. I think the crows in that painting were telling me to always go to the right side of anything in life. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2023 6:29:00 AM

I referenced my surgery in the blog I posted on the homepage.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2023 6:19:00 AM

The questionku's about my recent eye surgery and the difficulty that it presents itself in a jocular fashion. Of the crows, it's not the bird per se, but their 'voicing' - crows, and as you stated a directive of the right side. Crows do bear a mystique connotation, as well as, your husband's version but it's the former that people find them to be alluring birds. I appreciate your extended thoughts and clarity, and you're always welcome, Aloha William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/11/2023 7:06:00 PM

No long face . But broad smile. Loved and enjoyed.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/11/2023 7:14:00 PM

Lol, nice and sweet, Anisha, Aloha, William

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 2/11/2023 6:17:00 PM

This made me smile appreciating you well written! A.S.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/11/2023 7:00:00 PM

Considerable thanks, A.S., as this questionku defines my blog I posted on the home page, mahalo and Aloha, William

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/11/2023 5:24:00 PM

Loved your little Questionku. I am so hoping this means you are better and the treatment that you mentioned in your blog has worked. Is the long face because you were a day late ? You know that is quite unforgivable ? Someone waited for 24 hours, while those around were receiving candy and flowers. You simply MUST get it right next year. Cheers from Wendy. Welcome back.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/11/2023 6:51:00 PM

Lol, Wendy, as my recent surgery and drops that'll taper at month's end affect my vision, it does bear a comfortable fallback that benefits reasonably, or faults reliably. [Continues]

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/11/2023 6:49:00 PM

[Continued] Referencing said blog, the metrical entries are quite extensive. Rereads constants trailing thoughts does little justice as visual and mental aspects clash, hence, this questionku defines my predicament. Thanks for this great feedback, Aloha, William

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