Featured Poet****dino Bravo*2*

*Things I Miss*


I miss the soft touch of a woman's hands on my back
while we lay in bed just to relax.
The warmth of her body as we entwine
and the softness of her lips on mine. 
The hand in hand walks
and heart to heart talks 
that I see myself leaving behind. 
The playful fighting,  
and gentle biting,
these things are always on my mind. 
A person there at night to hold
on nights like this that are so cold.
I miss these things so often overlooked
as if I'm trying to live some story in a book. 
I'll hold onto these thoughts & feelings though, 
until I find them or its my time to go... 


"Sometimes its hard to see whats right in front of us, so I'll keep my eyes wide open & in
my heart I'll trust."

Dino Bravo
1/20/2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/21/2010 12:41:00 PM
This is really nice. I don't' see why Dino cannot consider himself a poet if he can do this!! I loved reading it! andrea
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Date: 1/20/2010 2:32:00 PM
I think both of these guys are tallented...I think they should join PS.....Marty
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Date: 1/20/2010 1:18:00 PM
Wonderful expressive emotion, Dino Bravo and bravo to u for letting Jared post this gem to share with us... if u had this once its easier the second time around cause u have experience under your belt... looking forward to reading more lines from your expressive and emotional pen... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:27:00 AM
enjoyed reading today, you are smoking! the other erotic poem made me blush;)
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:06:00 AM
Wow! Makes me wonder how he lost her...Well written, made me feel the sadness and loneliness of the character.
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