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While plumes flutter in rhythm, swans twirl a ballet girdling through agile quills aflight and pivot in choreography of glazed moondance till wings leave at finale's point when icy November appears on a graywashed stage. Contest Form- F sponsored by Broken Wings 1..28..2017

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Date: 2/10/2017 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful, and congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/3/2017 6:45:00 PM
Great imagery - congrats on your win, nette. Agnes
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Date: 2/3/2017 11:09:00 AM
The 6th line is my favorite in this beautiful write...Congrats on your win Nette
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:06:00 AM
The imagery is so beautifully portrayed. Loved it. Congratulations! A 7
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Date: 2/2/2017 10:14:00 PM
Lovely, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 2/2/2017 9:00:00 PM
Nette , congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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Date: 1/29/2017 10:18:00 AM
Nette, if you had centered this one it would have a shape similar to the outstretched wings of the swans. I marvel at the agility of this large birds as they paddle dance across the pond for take off...
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Date: 1/28/2017 11:23:00 PM
Simply marvelous! Best wishes for contest
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Date: 1/27/2017 10:26:00 PM
How you capture the free dance of swans in ballet form, then let them exit to migrate makes this poem exceptional! The last two lines are dramatic!
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:30:00 PM
Great imagery, a joy to read ... CayCay
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Date: 1/27/2017 8:54:00 PM
Wonderful Fibonacci, Nette. You make it come alive.
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Date: 1/27/2017 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful and very well written to the form Nette. This one felt as soft and light as the theme you chose.
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