Nette Onclaud Poet Fibonacci

Notes About The Poem

Feathers In Transit

While
plumes
flutter
in rhythm,
swans twirl a ballet
girdling  through agile quills aflight
and pivot in choreography of glazed moondance
till wings leave at  finale's point  when icy November appears on a graywashed stage.



Contest Form- F sponsored by Broken Wings
1..28..2017

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Paulette Calasibetta February 10, 2017 at 12:53 PM Beautiful, and congratulations on your win.

Agnes Krampe February 3, 2017 at 6:45 PM Great imagery - congrats on your win, nette. Agnes

Joseph May February 3, 2017 at 11:09 AM The 6th line is my favorite in this beautiful write...Congrats on your win Nette

Afzal Nusker February 3, 2017 at 3:06 AM The imagery is so beautifully portrayed. Loved it. Congratulations! A 7

Kim Rodrigues February 2, 2017 at 10:14 PM Lovely, Nette! Congrats!

Constance La France February 2, 2017 at 9:00 PM Nette , congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~

John Lawless January 29, 2017 at 10:18 AM Nette, if you had centered this one it would have a shape similar to the outstretched wings of the swans. I marvel at the agility of this large birds as they paddle dance across the pond for take off...

Anisha Dutta January 28, 2017 at 11:23 PM Simply marvelous! Best wishes for contest

Franco Gonza January 27, 2017 at 10:26 PM How you capture the free dance of swans in ballet form, then let them exit to migrate makes this poem exceptional! The last two lines are dramatic!

CayCay Godwin January 27, 2017 at 9:30 PM Great imagery, a joy to read ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2017 at 8:54 PM Wonderful Fibonacci, Nette. You make it come alive.

Chris Green January 27, 2017 at 4:17 PM Beautiful and very well written to the form Nette. This one felt as soft and light as the theme you chose.