Feathers In Transit

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While plumes flutter in rhythm, swans twirl a ballet girdling through agile quills aflight and pivot in choreography of glazed moondance till wings leave at finale's point when icy November appears on a graywashed stage. Contest Form- F sponsored by Broken Wings 1..28..2017

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/10/2017 12:53:00 PM

Beautiful, and congratulations on your win.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/3/2017 6:45:00 PM

Great imagery - congrats on your win, nette. Agnes

Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2017 11:09:00 AM

The 6th line is my favorite in this beautiful write...Congrats on your win Nette

Afzal Nusker

Date: 2/3/2017 3:06:00 AM

The imagery is so beautifully portrayed. Loved it. Congratulations! A 7

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/2/2017 10:14:00 PM

Lovely, Nette! Congrats!

Constance La France

Date: 2/2/2017 9:00:00 PM

Nette , congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem ~

John Lawless

Date: 1/29/2017 10:18:00 AM

Nette, if you had centered this one it would have a shape similar to the outstretched wings of the swans. I marvel at the agility of this large birds as they paddle dance across the pond for take off...