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Featherless Angels

gloom glides featherless angels to bleed the last ounce of ruby plasma dim damp clouds strike silver lightening moisture from tense ebony eyes inviting cobalt aura - glow saffron fire upon rainy faces pleading for final noise to hit fading ears is howling newborn cries entreating new flock to fly white Jupiter joy into sombre hearts stars relinquishing titian rays as articles of their stardust soars granting shadows plunging moonlight waves - melodies of hope in the light

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Date: 11/6/2023 3:45:00 AM
Brilliant lines throughout this monoku chain. I love how descriptive and unique your way with words is! This is so deep about featherless angels that sacrifice and give so much selflessly! You’ve delivered that so poetically and in a profound manner! I especially love the opening line and also jupiter line! Well woven! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning! Well deserved
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