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Feathered Foragers

herring gulls flocking
foraging at the beaches-
 disappearing lunch

7/27/18
  
Contest - Son of Senryu
Sponsor - Brahn Bailey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Richards Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 10:18 AM
What a fun little poem this is. And the picture is perfect !! Watching over your lunch, and keeping it in a cooler is a good idea!! LOL !!! Ps.....Thank you so much for my placement in your hummingbird contest !! So happy it met with your approval !!! Thank you!!
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 10:40 AM
your welcome and thank you for the kind words!
Faulkner Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Yes they're cute and all until they grab your sandwich! Made me smile :)
Kitchin Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Ha ha, birds can be so clever, thanks for stopping by!
Man Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Hey, who took my chips!! ;)
Kitchin Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 5:39 AM
ha ha, I once had them take raw chicken legs off a grill at the beach! Thanks for stopping by!
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Was this in the contest? For me it is quite haiku sounding. You had that twist in the final line that is so necessary to make a real haiku!
Kitchin Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Thank you Andrea, no it wasn't in the contest because it was my contest. Thanks for stopping by!
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