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herring gulls flocking foraging at the beaches- disappearing lunch 7/27/18 Contest - Son of Senryu Sponsor - Brahn Bailey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/18/2018 10:18:00 AM
What a fun little poem this is. And the picture is perfect !! Watching over your lunch, and keeping it in a cooler is a good idea!! LOL !!! Ps.....Thank you so much for my placement in your hummingbird contest !! So happy it met with your approval !!! Thank you!!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/18/2018 10:40:00 AM
your welcome and thank you for the kind words!
Date: 7/30/2018 3:18:00 PM
Yes they're cute and all until they grab your sandwich! Made me smile :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/30/2018 4:02:00 PM
Ha ha, birds can be so clever, thanks for stopping by!
Date: 7/27/2018 10:11:00 PM
Hey, who took my chips!! ;)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2018 5:39:00 AM
ha ha, I once had them take raw chicken legs off a grill at the beach! Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 7/27/2018 8:52:00 PM
Was this in the contest? For me it is quite haiku sounding. You had that twist in the final line that is so necessary to make a real haiku!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, no it wasn't in the contest because it was my contest. Thanks for stopping by!

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