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Feather Play

my eyes are covered

glide the plumes oh    so    s l o w l y

tickle my fancy


Was used in a contest once for  Richard Lamoureux

adventureromancesenryu

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James Inman

September 29, 2022 at 6:49 PM

Re-reading a few of my fav'd poems Andrea. WOW!

Deborah Burch

February 28, 2017 at 9:51 AM

Beautiful Andy! Congratulations!!! :) big hugs deb

Donna Roberts

February 25, 2017 at 8:10 AM

Conrats

Donna Roberts

February 25, 2017 at 8:11 AM

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 25, 2017 at 7:03 AM

a teasing one here, andrea, congrats on your top win in the contest!

Janis Medders Tobechi

February 24, 2017 at 4:14 PM

Lovely and sensuous. Congratulations on your trophy win.

Plant A Tree Poetry

February 24, 2017 at 7:30 AM

"I've been stupefied by your juxtaposing"

Eve Roper

February 23, 2017 at 11:18 PM

Wow very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Doug Vinson

February 23, 2017 at 9:14 PM

Wow, Andrea, I just have to.... : )

Anisha Dutta

February 23, 2017 at 9:00 PM

Congrats Andrea. Feeling happy to see on your usual topmost position. Hugs.

Alexis Y.

February 23, 2017 at 7:26 PM

Hi Mrs.Dietrich, This is sooo sexy. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Joseph May

February 23, 2017 at 6:26 PM

Love the last line Andrea...Congrats on your win..

John Lawless

February 23, 2017 at 5:34 PM

ah yes .... la plume de my taunt....or something like that. Well done and well deserved top spot Andrea

Jan Allison

February 23, 2017 at 3:01 PM

ooh la la Andrea! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin

February 23, 2017 at 12:24 PM

YES TO THE CONGRATULATIONS! Very sensual sexy stuff going on in this winning sexyku. You do erotica so well, who knew! We are definitely sharing a non-rant day - BIG hug ... CayCay

Charlie Smith

February 23, 2017 at 10:51 AM

Another feather in your cap congratulations Andrea...

Richard Lamoureux

February 23, 2017 at 9:01 AM

Congrats on your top placement Andrea! Hugs Rick.

Laura Leiser

July 21, 2015 at 2:52 PM

Wonderful, sensuous senryu, Andrea. I can see why you got a top win :)

Paul Callus

July 19, 2015 at 3:57 PM

Congrats on your top placement with this lovely, feathery, sexy senryu, Andrea! // paul

Scott Thirtyseven

July 18, 2015 at 9:31 AM

A little saucy. Best of luck in the comp.

Kim Merryman

July 17, 2015 at 9:38 PM

Ooh la la! Andrea, congrats on your first place win with this sexy senryu! Love, Kim

Daver Austin

July 17, 2015 at 2:25 PM

This reminds me of an old joke. A man on bicycle approaches a woman coming in the opposite direction also riding. A wind lifts her skirt. He says, "I say, airy isn't it" She says "Whatadja expect, feathers?" As for the poem - gave me a cozy feeling. Love, daver