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Feather In the Wind

Feather in the wind whirling, drifting aimlessly without direction Detached from its wing carried by the gentle wind never to be found Somewhere it would fall and land into oblivion lost and forgotten A fleeting image that caught my sweeping glances etched to memory

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Skat A

Date: 5/17/2015 9:27:00 AM

Nudershada, this is deep. strong to swaying like the unknown echo. Forever *SKAT*

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/7/2015 11:57:00 AM

Hi Nudershada. Powerful string of 'ku. Tugged at my heart. I'm glad you're back, kabayan. We commented on each other's works onece or twice before you went on a hiatus. Hope you stay. Hugs! Kim :)