Feather Electric -

The art of thought is our lovemaking connection,
histories a ladder to hypnotic healing, corrections uninvited
to our planet of puzzling passion
where a man and a woman make maps with crayons borrowed
from the cries of curiosity's cravings,
uncaring of the unwanted,
lawless in the laps of circumstance's tracks,
Homer & Tacitus imploring their heros to hush
as we warm arteries with a potion of Poetry unknown 'till now,

a tempest of truth she is to me,
teasing with pause & prance, with virtue & volatility,
with the caution of a Queen & frivolity of airborne feathers,
I did not ask for her, nor wish her to squeeze my heart,
regardless, I am now selfish, hunting for her hints
aspiring for the apple of her knowledge,
for the seed of her permission in my pulse,
I need her to sweat for my sweetness,
my will to hide abolished in the heat she spreads in spades,
I love my poet girl,
sometimes I am sorry for it, always excited by it,
sorriness skipping like a song wandering for a world with no wastings,
believing in beauty because she breathes,
I would tell God to wait so that I may play a moment more
with my poet girl, exchange another story, build another belief,
to bring our fears one step closer to nowhere,
to walk our eyelashes one centimeter nearer to completion's tear,
having our harvest support Heaven's uppermost tier  -

J.A.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 5, 2025 at 3:13 AM
Dear justin, As always a poem that flows with such passion and flames of fervency, for a poetic heart that captured your attention, youv expressed that with such beautiful and romantic metaphors that would impress many readers! “ believing in beauty because she breathes,” that is true love at its finest youv expressed there! How soul stirring! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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April 5, 2025 at 1:55 PM
Love gives us something to believe in Poetess...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Read it again. I need to read your writes tonight.
Bordner Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 7:28 PM
I need to have your lips upon my words, I need to have your spirit in my ears...your passion is unsurpassed Jade...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 8:23 PM
She must be soaring having read this. Such a dedication is indeed something to bring joy. Your admiration for this poetess is evident. Inspiration is a wonderful by product of admiration.
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June 23, 2014 at 1:58 AM
I'm happy for you both, then....Of course I'll visit your older work. I find your play on words fascinating....
Bordner Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 1:55 AM
Yes Eileen, and Love is a wondetful byproduct of inspiration. I love my Poet Girl, and I know that she loves me. I'm honored, and its super sweet of you to revisit some of my older works of passion and devotion. J.A.B.
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May 5, 2013 at 10:06 AM
I am honored to read artistry from such a brilliant mind.
Bordner Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 1:59 PM
This is sucha beautiful and motivating thing to say Karen, thank you very much - you make me proud to be an Artist - J.A.B. %
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April 12, 2013 at 12:05 PM
almost felt like a sinner just reading the poem. the best poem i've read all week~*~SKAT
Bordner Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Sinners are motivated people Skat - God wanted to experience Itself - so now what - lets make this world make some crazy sense - J.A.B. %
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Justin a very entertaining write....David
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April 8, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Life is very entertaining David - thanks for existing - J.A.B. %
Andresen Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 2:53 PM
You have found your lifes partner! - Well written in a lovely poem. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bordner Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 1:58 PM
She is a whisper in my dreams, a lightning bolt in my imagination, a pain that pays dividends Anne - I thank you for your kindness - J.A.B. %
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April 4, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Hey, first of all thanks for the visits! I really appreciate it. This poem is gorgeous! "To bring our fears one step closer to nowehere," - - really liked that line there. A very thought out poem with true craving passion. Very much impressed once again, Justin... will be looking forward to more.. Always, Laura
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April 6, 2013 at 2:02 PM
That line contains the essence of the message Laura; not suprised that you are attracted to that sentiment - from the word passion one can create the words, Pass - Poison - Sin - Passion - J.A.B. %
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