Feast of the Red Roses

One day I sat here dreaming
In my mind for what to draft
As she lay there in my studio
This artist began to craft
 
This is what I seen
As I pictured her this way
For conclusion of my efforts
They will get a chance to play
 
I started with her ankles
Using chocolate for the stems
Working to her heaven
Making a birds nest with her mane
 
Half way up her Torso
The chocolate touch with green
Continuance of the stems
Like I pictured in my dreams
 
Around her upper torso
To her shoulders and her breasts
Crafted with coloured icing
This put me to the test
 
Texture with awesome creases
Took shape from their stems
The picture that was forming
Would excite many men
 
Filling in the voids
With leaves and chocolate thorns
From my beautiful naked maiden
A garden of roses formed
 
In beautiful scarlet red
En captured with her curves
This 3D shaped body canvas
My love for her purely serves
 
So many hours of crafting
You should see my maiden now
Like a bed of roses
Listening to Bon Jovi now
 
Now my task is over
A picture for posterity
For it's time to do some gardening
My darling maiden and me
 

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Herber Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:38 PM
This is simply put beautiful! Your talent is incredible! Deb
Chircop Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 12:43 PM
masterpiece of poetry art and romance--great write--and Bon Jovi is great,love him too---charma
De La Keur Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Very nice, um, but why is it on here twice or am I going crazy? Oh yeah thanks for the compliment you gave my sister Illyanna, calling her "Wes Craven" was probably the BESTEST compliment ANYONE could give her. I love her twisted mind, hee hee. Again, great write.....Aleera
Keen Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:39 PM
this is stunning! thanks for your comments and what did you mean about me being featured?
Peranteau Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 6:16 AM
wow,.."THIS" is a painting with words I'd love to see on canvas James !!! GREAT POETRY MY FRIEND !!! james
Freeman Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Ha! James, you were painting some garden roses, Right! Lol, God bless, Moses! THANKS FOR THE CONGRATULATION!
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 3:02 PM
Like this one. A chocolate rose and icing sounds very enticing. I don't know how long the canvas would last though but in fantasy forever. Sara
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