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Fears Flicker

shadows move along
             the pavement under streetlights
                   where lone fears flicker


Heidi Sands

12/1/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Excellent Heidi :)
Sands Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Gary :)
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December 2, 2017 at 5:31 AM
I can the feel the tension in this Haiku, Heidi. Nicely done. // Barry
Sands Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Thank you Barry :)
May Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Lonely roads where shadows move...Very nice haiku Heidi
Sands Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Thank you so much Joseph :)
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December 1, 2017 at 3:42 PM
I can see why--apt images--very well described--a great Haiku!
Sands Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Thank you Vijay :)
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