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Fears and Tears

Forgive me now for being so slow. I just don’t know which way to go. If only I knew you loved me true maybe I’d give my heart to you. But my fears and tears from the past have chained and held me fast. And though you’ve made me feel I can do it my heart is afraid to let me go through it. No more fears No more tears My hopes and dreams never hesitated but now my fear is activated. Just wait for me to feel free again, to give my all to my new best friend. No more fears No more tears No more fears No more tears (Instrumental) You and I may win together if you help me cut through these tethers. Can you love someone with all these fears and can you stop all these tears? Will you tell me no more lies? And will you never say good-bye? No more fears No more tears No more fears No more tears. (Instrumental and fade....) By: Carole O’Terry Duet Copyright: 3/7/2018 “All Rights Reserved”

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Date: 3/15/2018 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful poem. Very creative and compelling. Fantastic write. Great video choice also.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/18/2018 2:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Frank. Carole :D
Date: 3/14/2018 2:34:00 AM
Maria makes a good point below, fear being a wall taller than it really is, fiercer than it really is and has a dragon's face on the front and a kitten's back side at the other end. Onward and upward! Fine write, Carole. Viv x
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/18/2018 2:07:00 AM
Thank you, Viv, for your comment and for your advice. Carole :D
Date: 3/12/2018 8:16:00 AM
Way to go Carole and the music put me in the right state of mind to fully enjoy it.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/12/2018 9:04:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Carole
Date: 3/12/2018 1:29:00 AM
No more fears... No more tears... My Carole dear... Love is near...
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/12/2018 9:05:00 PM
Thank you, Pashang. Carole
Date: 3/8/2018 9:02:00 PM
A beautiful poem my dear friend Carole. In my experience, fear is an invisible threshold which when crossed, one looks back and thinks - 'Is that all it was, there was no reason to fear' - So break those invisible chains - cross that invisible threshold and you will be free. 'One who hesitates is lost' Definitely a Fave of mine...Maria xxx
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/11/2018 4:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maria, for your wise comment. Carole
Date: 3/8/2018 7:54:00 PM
YOUR poem would make awesome lyrics to a sweet melody, Carole. Loved this.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/11/2018 4:41:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I would love to make it into a song. Carole
Date: 3/8/2018 7:06:00 PM
An awesome poignant write Carole; I agree with all of the comments but especially Silent One's!~Che :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/11/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thanks, Cheryl, for reading and for your comment. Carole Duet
Date: 3/8/2018 8:01:00 AM
The only thing that can heal a broken heart is love Carole, love is all around us and it always comes and goes... lovely poem..
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/8/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thank you,ZZ. You are so right. Just waiting.......again. Carole
Date: 3/7/2018 6:27:00 AM
Beautiful poem Carol..a hopeful message of longing for someone..enjoyed reading this poem..great ending.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/7/2018 11:36:00 PM
Hi Vijay and thanks for your lovely comment. Carole
Date: 3/7/2018 5:57:00 AM
Wonderful, Carole! A poem about vulnerability!
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/7/2018 11:35:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I'm so glad you liked the poem. Carole
Date: 3/7/2018 2:40:00 AM
- It is a big challenge for those of us who think of themselves as "burned children" and who therefore are afraid to take a chance and love again - Take the chance, Carole - A lovely poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/7/2018 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your very kind comment and advice. Carole Duet

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