Fears and Tears

Forgive me now for being so slow. I just don’t know which way to go. If only I knew you loved me true maybe I’d give my heart to you. But my fears and tears from the past have chained and held me fast. And though you’ve made me feel I can do it my heart is afraid to let me go through it. No more fears No more tears My hopes and dreams never hesitated but now my fear is activated. Just wait for me to feel free again, to give my all to my new best friend. No more fears No more tears No more fears No more tears (Instrumental) You and I may win together if you help me cut through these tethers. Can you love someone with all these fears and can you stop all these tears? Will you tell me no more lies? And will you never say good-bye? No more fears No more tears No more fears No more tears. (Instrumental and fade....) By: Carole O’Terry Duet Copyright: 3/7/2018 “All Rights Reserved”
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Sheehan Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Wonderful poem. Very creative and compelling. Fantastic write. Great video choice also.
Duet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:04 AM
Thank you so much, Frank. Carole :D
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March 14, 2018 at 2:34 AM
Maria makes a good point below, fear being a wall taller than it really is, fiercer than it really is and has a dragon's face on the front and a kitten's back side at the other end. Onward and upward! Fine write, Carole. Viv x
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March 18, 2018 at 2:07 AM
Thank you, Viv, for your comment and for your advice. Carole :D
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March 12, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Way to go Carole and the music put me in the right state of mind to fully enjoy it.
Duet Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Thanks, Richard. Carole
Salehi Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:29 AM
No more fears... No more tears... My Carole dear... Love is near...
Duet Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Thank you, Pashang. Carole
Williams Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 9:02 PM
A beautiful poem my dear friend Carole. In my experience, fear is an invisible threshold which when crossed, one looks back and thinks - 'Is that all it was, there was no reason to fear' - So break those invisible chains - cross that invisible threshold and you will be free. 'One who hesitates is lost' Definitely a Fave of mine...Maria xxx
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March 11, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Thank you so much, Maria, for your wise comment. Carole
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March 8, 2018 at 7:54 PM
YOUR poem would make awesome lyrics to a sweet melody, Carole. Loved this.
Duet Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I would love to make it into a song. Carole
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March 8, 2018 at 7:06 PM
An awesome poignant write Carole; I agree with all of the comments but especially Silent One's!~Che :)
Duet Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thanks, Cheryl, for reading and for your comment. Carole Duet
One Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 8:01 AM
The only thing that can heal a broken heart is love Carole, love is all around us and it always comes and goes... lovely poem..
Duet Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Thank you,ZZ. You are so right. Just waiting.......again. Carole
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March 7, 2018 at 6:27 AM
Beautiful poem Carol..a hopeful message of longing for someone..enjoyed reading this poem..great ending.
Duet Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 11:36 PM
Hi Vijay and thanks for your lovely comment. Carole
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March 7, 2018 at 5:57 AM
Wonderful, Carole! A poem about vulnerability!
Duet Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Thank you, Kim. I'm so glad you liked the poem. Carole
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March 7, 2018 at 2:40 AM
- It is a big challenge for those of us who think of themselves as "burned children" and who therefore are afraid to take a chance and love again - Take the chance, Carole - A lovely poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Duet Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your very kind comment and advice. Carole Duet
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