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Fear V/S Dream

What is it that I fear? when things are bright clear Maybe dreams those so dear; fail to come near Dream akin to concubine; Shy on eyes wide open Will ever be mine; like crown on head shine In midst of confusion, I lay lonely on horizon, To hunt down illusion, and implore inspiration To conquer denunciation, of dreams I so realize And cloaked in audacity; to sterile my fear entirely In solitude I shall cherish; the scars of past fear Still my dreams unbridle; like unbound lover Enticingly fail to ebb, vigorous in pride Had no doubt with glittering hope, dawn will arise rAHUL...

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Date: 8/7/2009 3:28:00 AM
Excellent write and I loved the last stanza
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Date: 8/5/2009 7:20:00 AM
thanks kindly for your thoughtful comments. your poetry is wonderful. presently i am off the site, but will certainly look forward to reading more of your work when I return. love, shar
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Date: 7/12/2009 2:43:00 PM
sterilize my fear..enticingly failing to ebb...very rap...sing songie..serious subject for this form...
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:12:00 PM
I like the language, so sofisticated and correct jojojjo sounds like old speech, ancient, epic, mystic almost; thanks for sharing yeah!!!!
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Date: 5/16/2009 10:50:00 PM
Lovely poem rahul, James
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Date: 5/16/2009 9:18:00 PM
I like the flow in this poem. -Alley
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