Fear Turns To Fairytale

"A woodland path in the dappled sun, hushed and quiet "

                                                             ~A Rambling Poet~


Are the woods waiting to spring a surprise,
do I hear haunting melodies and cries,
Is there someone hiding behind those trees,
are the woods filled with painfully stinging bees,
I tread slowly for there might be a snake,
my throat is parched, is there a lake?
Are there strange creatures hanging from those firs,
am I hallucinating? My heart is in a stir...
That light ahead, is it fog or a ghostly apparition,
scared I walk on biting my nails, eyes wide open.

Thoughts, then run rushing back to childhood
and suddenly I am brave like little Red Riding Hood.
Fearless of the wolves that’ll cross my path
I surge ahead, with a song in my heart.
Maybe I’ll find a cottage like Goldilocks
with porridge filled in three little pots.
I even might end up with dwarfs seven in number
waiting for a prince while in slumber.
My fears all vanish one by one 
the power of nature overwhelms
I look up at the woods in awe and wonder
to God’s fairytale I surrender…


Afroze 
for Constances's contest  A woodland path
7/6/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Aarif Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 6:14 AM
marvellous poem....loved the idea behind it...keep it up...and all the best....
Guzzi Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 7:30 AM
charming write congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mannan Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 11:53 PM
This is super Afroze. Loved the rhyme and images. Many congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 9:17 PM
from fear to awe to surrender. Just wonderful. Congrats on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Hendricks Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 12:49 PM
An apt title to this awesome poem. Good job and congratulations on your well-deserved placement. :-)
Muzzey Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations Afroze, on your first place win with this lovely write~ Caryl
Brown Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "A Woodland Path" contest Afroze. Love, Carol
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June 12, 2011 at 2:04 PM
I am reading another beautiful write after Linda's, these woodland poems...Love fairy tales and you've enthralled me today Afroze with this one.many congrats on your well deserved 1st place win..love, gautami
Osita Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Beautifully writen!.Many Congrats on your first place win in constance's contest.cheers
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:18 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Afroze
Richards Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Such a great imagination!! Congratulations on your win!!! :)
Long Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:15 AM
I loved little red riding hood as a child this was a fantastic write congrats on your win.. croy
Long Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:14 AM
congrats on this fantastic win. cory
Sweetheart Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 7:14 AM
Congrats Alfroze on your first place win in this beautiful contest with an equally beautiful entry luv.. enjoy..top billing..
La France Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 6:38 AM
Congratulations, Afroze, on a shared first place win in my contest with this sublime and divine poem. Could you please send me by soupmail your address so I can forward the Certificate of Achievement in Poetry which is the prize for this contest ~~
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June 7, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Very nice poem Afroze..enjoyed.Best wishes.
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