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Fear of Wings

FEAR OF WINGS

the birds bump, bruise, bleed
   swarm the air
      the chill of November
          screams cling to snow

    V  V   V
V    V   V   V

pinned on a clothesline
   dark mourning clothes
       necks turn to stare at stranger
            with sallow face
                 cacophonous wind of wings

V***V***V***V***V***V***V***V***V 

the ravens burn this somber town
      red clings to orange
           gray-black smoke steeple high

V              V          V
V         V        V        V

the crows in control
     of their gangster pavement
           stranger weeds through
                 the darkness that covers the earth
                       bleeding head wrapped in bondage

VVVVVVVV VVVVVVVV VVVVVVVV
the birds mock and feel her fear she opens the car door even when closed in she sees their beady eyes hears the wretched entertainment of their caws
V V V VvvvvV
they are still clattering around inside her head the dove white limo moves away slowly humming a dreadful dirge V V V V 8/13/2017 Inspired by Hitchcock’s The Birds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hoffman Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Great take on The Birds movie Kim; that movie is a Hitchcock classic!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Thanks Cheryl! :)
Wood Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Wow, Creepy. Great word choices in this one Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Cozart Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 10:03 AM
The V's are very clever. The more I read the more it reminded me of 'The Birds". Good write.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 10:16 AM
Thanks, Dale :)
Pachecho Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Nice job on this one, Kim. Enjoyed reading.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 10:58 PM
Thanks, Connie!
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Amazing graphics to illustrate your poem, Kim---I can feel the fear!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
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