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Let leave this uncontented mind That clings to hate for fear of change Such pain of sight that keeps me blind When light to dawn could be as strange As fear of loss renounces love So dreams are stilled before their due My relevance is to rise above With heart to bravely live life true... 02/21/2017

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Date: 10/31/2017 10:23:00 AM
Thank you for sharing (Tyfs) this gorgeous poem, Charlie. The love, compassion and wisdom is outstanding. A specially crafted poem of creative genius. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.
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Date: 10/31/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Freddie...
Date: 3/5/2017 9:11:00 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:21:00 PM
Thank you Funom...
Date: 3/5/2017 8:58:00 AM
This is perfect Charlie and shows your strength. What a great ending. Very inspiring :)
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi...
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi...
Date: 2/24/2017 10:47:00 PM
Yes, that is a good message. to rise above this way of feeling and live life!!
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Date: 2/24/2017 11:08:00 PM
Sometimes easier said, but our duty to ourselves is to endure. Thank you for the visit and your kindness Dear Andrea...
Date: 2/23/2017 1:42:00 PM
It's ok to stay in a comfort zone, but there are times when we have to take a gamble, Charlie! A most meaningful poem. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/23/2017 11:09:00 PM
It speaks of 4 different fears an a reason to rise above. Hope you enjoyed the read Paul. Thanks for the visit...
Date: 2/22/2017 11:51:00 PM
Amen!
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Richard...
Date: 2/22/2017 9:35:00 PM
Very positive and smooth flowing upbeat expression of strength in poetic verse. Life is too precious not to --truly live it.... Superb poetry my friend. A fav....
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:23:00 PM
You are too kind Robert, thank You...
Date: 2/22/2017 9:27:00 PM
Should have placed Charlie...don't know about that Seeker dude lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:30:00 PM
Didn't get it entered in time, doesn't really matter, I hardly ever place well in the contests, I like to enter though. I always seem to have a harder time coming up with a theme than I do writing the poem so the contests make it easier...thanks for the thought...
Date: 2/22/2017 1:28:00 PM
A 7 for this concise, profoundly meaningful poem, Charlie! Janice
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:07:00 PM
Many thanks my dear...
Date: 2/21/2017 11:29:00 PM
Pure poetry. Just Beautiful. blessings, lynn
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Date: 2/22/2017 6:27:00 AM
Thank you Lynn...
Date: 2/21/2017 5:10:00 PM
Very uplifting and encouraging my friend. This was really nice.
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Date: 2/22/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Chris...
Date: 2/21/2017 4:41:00 PM
Beautiful, Charlie.
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Date: 2/22/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Agnes...

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